Wolkendrache wrote:(but it’s Silverberg, not Silverburg).
Wolkendrache wrote:If you write more of these stories, you should compile them chronologically so they can be read as completion to the game while playing it, in that case just give information in or above the title about when it’s best to read the particular story (e.g. this story is best read in between the dialogue with Ledon and Kessler at the secret factory.
BrucePrintscreen wrote: I love the letter in the beginning. I was feeling like I were in the Empire indeed.
Roshambeaux wrote:I really love the fact that you gave the 'non-obvious' SoD the spotlight.
Roshambeaux wrote:Unlike a certain fanmade game creator, you certainly know how to write a story.
sneaky_shiko wrote:Thank you everyone who commented on my last story. WIth your words of encouragement, I have written another story, this time about Ace. Not quite as minor of a character as Ledon, I'll admit, but that scene in Suikoden III when Ace mentions to Geddoe's unit that he used to serve in Gilbert's Mercenaries, I thought it was just begging to be expanded on.
Hope you guys enjoy, and if you like it, please comment.
Wolkendrache wrote:Solon as general of the Third Army: where did you get that information from? By the time of the first Muse battle, Kiba is still general of the Third. Solon is either general of the Second or Fourth, the sources I know are contradictory. Due to accomplishments/age I would say Han is Second and Solon (the youngest) is Fourth. Seed and Culgan are serving as lieutenants or vice-generals under Solon.
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