An Accidental Star: A Suikoden Story

[Nikisaur]

Hey so as some of you know, I've been writing a thing. I've uploaded it to fanfiction.net but thought you guys may be interested. I won't post it here but it can be read here.

It begins in Muse towards the start of the events of Suikoden 2, sticking to the story as close as I could make it. Minor scene alterations but ah well. The title came from the song Pacifier by Shihad.

It's not much more than a prologue at the moment but let me know what you think.

EDIT: Chapters uploaded = 5

[gilgamesh31]

Its a good start, im interested in seeing how Ariel gets caught up in the war, i like your writing style as well. That was clive, viktor and flik in the story wasnt it, or am i being dumb? Nice Millie hat by the way.

[Nikisaur]

3/3 there Gilgamesh. Full marks Thanks, this is the first chapter of many, but sets the scene well.

Yeah, I made it ^.^ Rest of the costume is incomplete and under my bed

[gilgamesh31]

Yeah i think it sets the scene well, good job. Is it set in the time that Riou and party are helping Alex explore the Sindar ruins just before they get locked up in Muse or am i way off?

[Nikisaur]

I'll level with you and say I'm not 100% sure. After the fort burned down. I'll upload another chapter today or tomorrow. Probably tomorrow as today only has an hour left :/

[gilgamesh31]

Yeah well around that timeframe basically. Cool i look forward to the next fix tommorow then. Im just waking up here to a nice summersday as you go to bed, are you still trapped in the winter on that side of the world?

[Nikisaur]

Yeah definitely winter - that's why I'm getting so much writing done. All of this has happened in the last week or so. Chapter two just uploaded, kind of rushed it but I hope you enjoy (I'll put a note in the original post too).

[gilgamesh31]

Yeah i always get loads of work done in the winter because its too cold to do much of anything without getting ill. I dont have to think about that for a few more months yet though. I like chapter 2, the character discriptions are nice and detailed. I was starting to wonder what Ariel looked like. You got Nash's personality down to a tee, him and his manwhore ways.

[Nikisaur]

Thanks! I thought Nash was going to be really hard, as I only know him from Suikoden 2. Thinking like, okay, 15 years before that... Plus I have a friend who loves him so I didn't want to get it wrong... :/

[Nikisaur]

Chapter Three uploaded too!

[RangerDeon]

XD I love it!

[RangerDeon]

Thanks! I thought Nash was going to be really hard, as I only know him from Suikoden 2. Thinking like, okay, 15 years before that... Plus I have a friend who loves him so I didn't want to get it wrong... :/

...I wonder who that friend is....
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

[Nikisaur]

My editor in chief! Or...guy that reads it and goes "I love it!" A truly wonderous and inspiring being

[RangerDeon]

Bloody fantastic, you are, my dear

[Nikisaur]

Chapter Four and Five uploaded! The action begins!