For starters in the Suikoden V character list, you have Nether's Gate instead of just Nether Gate.
Also to recruit Moroon, you don't need to bring Maroon to speak to him at Baska Mine. You can bring either Muroon, or Miroon. (I've always been able to recruit him by bringing first Miroon, then Meroon.)
Also in Richard's bio it reads:
Richard idolizes Mueller, and praises his constantly.
"his" should actually be "him"
After the war ends, everything thinks Richard should make his own unit, but he prefers to stick with Mueller.
"everything" should be "everyone"
Oh and can someone explain this quote to me a bit better?
Retso's wife passed away a few years prior to the Sun Rune War. As a single father, Hai Yo often feels like an "idiot father" because Shun Min grew up so fast and didn't have much time to be a kid.
Why was Hai Yo mentioned, when he never had anything to do with Shun Min until a few years after the Sun Rune War?